meh. slow and too long for a boring story
ok WTF was with that green crap? what was it? also what was with that e that deedeedee and bowser were on with the green ball with hands. (yes, i am aware that it was crazy and master hand) also why don't you make some sprite animations that are more than 2-3 frames. and also when thier were animation they were lowzy. the only good animations you did were the zoom ins and outs and still you did they WAY to much so it stop being good after the first 2 minutes ir so.
Why did you think that ANYONE would want to watch a gommba jumping on blocks with no animation on the gommba. i suggest not make a very long story for a 1st animation in a suposed "series" the only time something should be long is if it has fast fighting action,fast and not too complex plot,a final in a long running series,READABLE TEXT,and LOTS of animation.
also next time PLEASE add a scene selection if youare gonna make an nimation as long as that.oh ya and if you respond don't say "OMG U MISPELT!>:(" becuase i am typeing fast so don't say anything like that. also don't say anything about my animations because this is a review about YOUR animation.
i hpe you have better luck with your next flash.